I want to rewrite the third paragraph. I use the word I way to many times. I just can't figure out a good way to say it.

SO any help would be greatly appreciated.





February 13, 2007



Dr. Someone

Superintendent of Schools

Something School Department

101 Street

SomeWhere, Maine 04096







Dear Dr. Someone,

I would love the opportunity to be interviewed for the kindergarten teacher position. With my degree in Elementary Education and teaching certificate, I am extremely interested in teaching kindergarten.



I have spent the past year in a self-contained classroom teaching ten students in kindergarten thru eighth grade. My experience has shaped me into an observant, flexible teacher dedicated to guiding students toward ongoing success. My lessons are differentiated to meet the needs of each individual student. I simultaneously taught basic addition skills to a kindergartner and multiplication facts to my third and fourth graders, while also keeping the other students on task. I am a master planner, and I can readily adapt my plans to accommodate a variety of educational backgrounds.



With these unique strengths, I write because I am returning to Southern Maine in June, and I seek a position as an elementary school teacher within the Something School Department.



I am excited about the possibility of a personal interview to further discuss my qualifications with you. I can be reached at (My number here). Thank you for taking the time to review my credentials and to consider me for employment with your district.



Best Regards,









Jaime Marie B



Enclousures
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Jaime owned by

Mya the dog

and the cats:Crash, Gabby and Tucker

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