How about this:

Before:

With these unique strengths, I write because I am returning to Southern Maine in June, and I seek a position as an elementary school teacher within the Something School Department.

After:

I am planning to return to Southern Maine in June and seek a position as an elementary school teacher within the Something School Department. I bring with me many unique strengths and a strong dedication to devote myself to enriching the lives of children.

Remember the dear little children. It might help to break into song, say Whitney Houston's "I belive the Children are our future, teach them well and let them lead the way..." at any interview... (I probably screwed the lyrics up, haven't heard the song since the 80s, pre-Bobby Brown)
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Tammy
Stanley and Pookey

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