First you have some unreal beliefs. Boas, ONLY come from areas that do not get cold. So they do not hibernate or whatever word you choose to use.
Savs are the same. They come from areas very near the equator. Both these animals expand or contract their activity based on wet/dry seasons. When its dry, they stay hidden, but not cold. In otherwords, neither one of these are friggin gardersnakes in Canada. Ones from equatorial america and the others from equatorial africa.
The reason no one breeds Savs and waters is, you cannot afford to. They both are imported at prices that are below what it takes to produce them. Savs come it at a price about equal or less then, one weeks feeding for the adult pair. Waters come in at a higher price. But keeping adults is many many many times more expensive then keeping adult Savs.
These cheap imports also depress the market for all species. So breeding monitors is not a easy task, when you can go and buy another species like a Sav for $19.95 or less. Until that changes, there is no reason to breed them. Consider, breeding larger monitors in captivity is work and takes space. Both have a value that exceeds breeding cheap monitors.
Back to monitors feeding. When they are in the right conditions, they feed like pigs, no wait, thats not true, pigs do not even come close. They feed on everything and anything they can get in their mouths. If they do not, you are not doing something right. End of that story.
About books. I feel for you, most not only suck, but are totally headed in the wrong direction. Just look at the survival rates of monitors. Its so low, that there is room for millions more every year, not to good for an animals that easily lives one to two or more decades. This includes both imports and captive hatched.
Don't get me wrong, there are some parts of books that are usable for captives. As there is some good information on their natural history. The problem is its buried so deep, its very hard to seperate the dishes from the dishwater.
Even the best books forget to tell you whats important and whats not important. For instance, They tell you how to do something. But forget to mention how to measure what you did. The measurement is always the progress of the subject, the actual monitor itself. If its doing poorly(like yours) then what your doing is wrong. Like what your doing. If its doing well, then your doing well.
As far as I can tell, monitor keepers practice fear management. That is, they will do all this and that to prevent something bad, but forget to allow something good. For instance, these keepers worry all about this and that, and do this and that to prevent whatever the heck they are worried about. The problem is, they forget to give the poor captive what it actually needs and that is to have a life. Once the monitors has a life, they do not get all that this and that keepers are trying to prevent. Consider, your task is to give them a life, not keep their heart beating.
I know this sounds pretty stinking basic, and well, it is. Monitor keepers and their literature, suck. Plain and simple.
In case you are not aware, I have bred many many species, large and small, to many many generations. Like around 15 or more species past 5 generations. Some past 15 generations.
All I can say is, got me. I do not do anything I am suppose to do(according to the books) I simply, "heatum and feedum" and they will not stop growing and producing. Oh, and they live forever. Yes, forever, some I am hatching now, could outlive me, so for all intends and purposes, thats forever. My oldest large monitor is 22plus, and my oldest small monitor is 18 plus years. Both are great great great great, plus, grandparents.
And don't go telling me to write a book, I just wrote what is important. Go by your monitors results and FEEDUM. Oh the heatum part is, they need a range of temps from very hot, 135F plus, cool, 70F or even less, and they will do the rest. Of course theres a ton of little things that are totally dependant on your monitors individual results. But they are actually little tiny, in field adjustments, based soley on the monitors individual tastes and preferences. Done, cheers