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well here it is give me your worst. this is my first web site ever made so hey bare with me here there is more that needs to be done to it but im working on it. if you find any bad links or a misspelled word or anythign please let me know or if there is something you think i should add to it or somethign missing let me know.

www.shangri-laselectserpents.com
my new webpage

Congrats on the website, I see a few things I would change, feel free to reject ot adopt any of my suggestions:

Red robed guy holding a chicken foot? OK, not sure what it is but is a bit distracting to me.

Ball python morph page, the background of colored pebbles is very pretty, so preety it draws attention away from the ball pythons you are trying to show off. IMO go with a MUCH plainer background so the snake is what pops.

Not a BP guy but for pastel, codiminant I believe is the wrong term. A good example of a codominant morph is the motley gene in boas, there are cleary distinguishable phenotypes normal, motley and super motley. suggested changes to wording....

We are very proud of our Pastel Ball Python it is 800 grams and still holding color. This is a Dominant Morph when bred to a normal statistically half of the offspring should be Normal and half should be Pastel. Also when bred to another pastel statistically you should get 1/4 normals and 3/4 pastels with 1/4 being homozygous or super pastel.

BP morph, at the bottom of the page IN LARGE BOLD is "THERE IS NO GUARANTEE" I'd tone that down a little, you're emphasizing a negative statement.

I like the links to care sheets on each page, I'd also add a care sheet section to your main menu.....

collection available care sheets terms....

Boa constrictor collection page again with the co-dom morph label on dominant morphs

BRB, only care sheet I read, break it up into sections and expand...

Heating blah blah
humidity blah blah
caging blah blah
etc. etc.

POh yeah, back to main collection page, watch your page width, can be anoying to scroll left and right to read your blurbs

terms page:

Deaths due to shipping will be replaced with another snake of equal or greater value there will be no cash refunds

And thanks for the link!!
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Thanks,

Dave Colling

www.rainbows-r-us-reptiles.com

0.1 Wife (WC and still very fiesty)
0.2 kids (CBB, a big part of our selective breeding program)

LOL, to many snakes to list, last count:
24.36 BRB
19.19 BCI
And those are only the breeders

lots.lots.lots feeder mice and rats

ok thanks ill see what i can all do. this is why i have other dbl check it sometimes i miss somethign or do somethign wrong i have been tryin to do this so fast that i screw up some times. and as far as the ball pythons go when breed a pastel to pastel the super form has a very light colored head and alot more intence color you can see the diff in them unlike hypo boas as to where you have to kinda guess the super poss supers and prob supers etc lol if super pastels there head is almost white as babies quite easy to tell diff. but ill go through tonight and try to change a few things oh and background for the pics that was the first thing i had since those are pics from out door photo shoot i just put them up to save time i will be adding and changing pics down road. since seems like when i want new pics they all seem to wantt o go into shed dang animnals.

congrats, this looks like a great site so far. i may just have to use it to scoop up one of those jungle carpet pythons too
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Tim

0.1 Colombian Rainbow Boa
1.0 Albino Motley Corn
1.0 Black cat

Congrats on getting your website up and running! Looks like you've put a lot of work into it. I can't wait to see the little Rainbow babies on there!!
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Aubrey Ross

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www.SlipstreamSerpents.com

there is more work still to be done on it this is just the minimum i would let it be for the first public showing of it. i like to try and update as much as poss between me my girl and her bro we are tryin to have thigns run as smooth as poss. also updated asap btw 2 of the carpt babies have shed so they will be up soon enough and aug 10 is coming up quick for those rainbows