You have a LOT of talent. That said, PERSONALLY, I think the very bold upper coloration draws MY eyes away from the subject of the artwork. It almost seems like a different color combo may have worked better, possibly just not such an abberant combo....I really don't know, I'm not an art critic, and even though I'm looking at it, I couldn't say what color combo I think would be any better(if it would even matter). Some how it just didn't "flow" for ME. Well, like I said, you have a TON of talent and I'm not trying to be a tool, just trying to give my honest feedback. And in the art world, my opinion probably isn't worth the "paper" this reply is written on!!! Take care