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Keleos was a great warrior in battle...famed among the Sandfires, Worshipped by the by the mighty German Giants and fought alongside the Leucistics in the battle for fame against the Leopard geckos.... for you see these Geckos had held top rank for the longest time, and now, Keleos decided to unite the many morphs of her brothers and stand up to these monstrosoties. Now Keleos was not any of these....she was an outsider and did not belong to any of the villiages...for you see she was not a sandfire, snow, or Blood.... she was a hypo clearnails...another morph off the sandfire tribe....she had extraordinary speed and was not the one to give up in a feroucious battle with a silkie... she had the most beautiful armor...a yellow sheild...a clear sword (hence the name clearnails...) and the body armor was adorned with markings that were burnt in by the sun...and that is what Keleos means....flaming...like the sun...now while she was out hunting crickets, she came across a wounded snow...the ground around him was splattered with blood and his last words were...it was a...a...carrottail....and suddenly the life blinked out of him....she looked around with revenge in her eyes, for this was her cagemate...and now he was gone....... To Be continued....

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thanks, Nic

LOL, very nice. Just one thing. You should have done a prologue first so you wouldnt have to explain everything. you could have done all the explaining in the prologue. well we can just make chapter one the prologue. I like it though. very much,lol. Darn leapord geckos. cant trust anything that can lick its own eyebrows.

carrottail.... Vicious beasts they are. HAHA

Hehe, off to a nice start....maybe...write...with...fewer...dots....
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1 female calico cat, born 6/7/04

Animals can't talk! They project their thoughts into our brains. At least mine do it that way.

Good story though.

>>Keleos was a great warrior in battle...famed among the Sandfires, Worshipped by the by the mighty German Giants and fought alongside the Leucistics in the battle for fame against the Leopard geckos.... for you see these Geckos had held top rank for the longest time, and now, Keleos decided to unite the many morphs of her brothers and stand up to these monstrosoties. Now Keleos was not any of these....she was an outsider and did not belong to any of the villiages...for you see she was not a sandfire, snow, or Blood.... she was a hypo clearnails...another morph off the sandfire tribe....she had extraordinary speed and was not the one to give up in a feroucious battle with a silkie... she had the most beautiful armor...a yellow sheild...a clear sword (hence the name clearnails...) and the body armor was adorned with markings that were burnt in by the sun...and that is what Keleos means....flaming...like the sun...now while she was out hunting crickets, she came across a wounded snow...the ground around him was splattered with blood and his last words were...it was a...a...carrottail....and suddenly the life blinked out of him....she looked around with revenge in her eyes, for this was her cagemate...and now he was gone....... To Be continued....
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>>TELL ME IF YOU LIKED IT AND I WILL CONTINUED WRITING!
>>outback_fire@hotmail.com
>>thanks, Nic
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